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ECH's avatar

Wow! This really tilts you head in! I like the pacing, dialogue, and descriptive language; but I would really like to know more about Abigail's backstory. I have a hunch, though, that more of that will be revealed as time goes on.

It is difficult and unwise to judge an entire book/story based off of a single part or chapter, so my only thoughts so far are first impressions.

I like the idea, I like the main character (which I assume Abigale is at least one of the more important characters), and I'm happy with how this reads and flows.

Good job!

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Nicole's avatar

Yay we are finally here!!! So excited!!!!

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