Wow! This really tilts you head in! I like the pacing, dialogue, and descriptive language; but I would really like to know more about Abigail's backstory. I have a hunch, though, that more of that will be revealed as time goes on.
It is difficult and unwise to judge an entire book/story based off of a single part or chapter, so my only thoughts so far are first impressions.
I like the idea, I like the main character (which I assume Abigale is at least one of the more important characters), and I'm happy with how this reads and flows.
Yeah, you'll definitely get more about Abigail as the series goes. For now, she's guarded about her past, and pretty much everything about herself. As she settles in, makes friends, etc. she'll start to open up to others, including the readers.
Abigail is what I'd call an Anchor character. The Academy itself is the main character, which will be more apparent over time, and each character gives us a different take on it, a different facet of life at the Academy. Abby is a character we will see quite often for sure, especially because everything she is seeing are things she is seeing for the first time. But there's a lot of other characters we'll be seeing, starting with Garrett who is coming up next time!
Wow! This really tilts you head in! I like the pacing, dialogue, and descriptive language; but I would really like to know more about Abigail's backstory. I have a hunch, though, that more of that will be revealed as time goes on.
It is difficult and unwise to judge an entire book/story based off of a single part or chapter, so my only thoughts so far are first impressions.
I like the idea, I like the main character (which I assume Abigale is at least one of the more important characters), and I'm happy with how this reads and flows.
Good job!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Yeah, you'll definitely get more about Abigail as the series goes. For now, she's guarded about her past, and pretty much everything about herself. As she settles in, makes friends, etc. she'll start to open up to others, including the readers.
Abigail is what I'd call an Anchor character. The Academy itself is the main character, which will be more apparent over time, and each character gives us a different take on it, a different facet of life at the Academy. Abby is a character we will see quite often for sure, especially because everything she is seeing are things she is seeing for the first time. But there's a lot of other characters we'll be seeing, starting with Garrett who is coming up next time!
Can't wait!
Yay we are finally here!!! So excited!!!!